tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post6666696951967150440..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Countdown for RWP #116Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-14980429632474079742010-03-08T21:08:29.119-08:002010-03-08T21:08:29.119-08:00Your words take me to a different time and space.B...Your words take me to a different time and space.Beautifully written - love the lines "scribes a runic sentence/<br />on the doorsill of myth."Uma Gowrishankarhttp://umaathreya.blogsome.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-59316158129594896732010-03-08T20:47:25.212-08:002010-03-08T20:47:25.212-08:00Like how you ran with the clock that struck thirte...Like how you ran with the clock that struck thirteen.Irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12918979903066830662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-593863741549317272010-03-07T10:17:17.497-08:002010-03-07T10:17:17.497-08:00I love the use of numbers here. You give us on(c)e...I love the use of numbers here. You give us on(c)e and twelve early on and then expand a moment through images and bring us back to the never-ceasing count of time with thirteen in the end.EKSwitajhttp://www.elizabethkateswitaj.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-28744188838175624892010-03-07T03:15:40.949-08:002010-03-07T03:15:40.949-08:00I really enjoyed this work Sue. Excellent!
Hugs,...I really enjoyed this work Sue. Excellent! <br /><br />Hugs, G<br /><br />PS: Are you having any issues reaching OSI? Ive been denied access. Just wondering.Geraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-18092340686205278072010-03-07T02:32:10.739-08:002010-03-07T02:32:10.739-08:00I think you caught and beautifully expressed the m...I think you caught and beautifully expressed the mythic quality of the image. I also liked the reference to decades as insignificant others who parade in a single file. Also, for some reason, I found myself wishing for another word besides 'hazy', as if it were too whimsical for the mythic feel of the poem, but I can't put my finger on why that is. A really fine poem, I enjoyed it- Great work!Jim McNeelyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09205828653643715184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-60130718619800266732010-03-07T02:13:53.804-08:002010-03-07T02:13:53.804-08:00Last line teases..!!Last line teases..!!Tamarind~https://www.blogger.com/profile/06451187175850356692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-26420335890123778722010-03-06T20:17:23.401-08:002010-03-06T20:17:23.401-08:00I enjoyed the energy and movement of your poem. I...I enjoyed the energy and movement of your poem. It covers alot of ground in just a few lines. Thank you for sharing it.Cindy Veachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01182863995577985610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-56064265259527988832010-03-06T17:12:03.655-08:002010-03-06T17:12:03.655-08:00I'm so glad I clicked over and saw the image t...I'm so glad I clicked over and saw the image that inspired your poem ... your words are the perfect pairing for that picture. Awesome!JP/debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16588554280207421724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-67312355826541985422010-03-05T19:16:45.351-08:002010-03-05T19:16:45.351-08:00Sue,
I love what you did with this. Absolutely bea...Sue,<br />I love what you did with this. Absolutely beautiful and mystical.<br />Thanks for sharing.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-15954900042446455632010-03-05T19:16:45.350-08:002010-03-05T19:16:45.350-08:00Sue,
I love what you did with this. Absolutely bea...Sue,<br />I love what you did with this. Absolutely beautiful and mystical.<br />Thanks for sharing.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-18952506521117692362010-03-05T16:43:00.758-08:002010-03-05T16:43:00.758-08:00This poem glides.Hard to do.Beautiful.This poem glides.Hard to do.Beautiful.rallentandanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-52043445695974289462010-03-05T12:52:50.728-08:002010-03-05T12:52:50.728-08:00I have to agree...that clock striking thirteen rea...I have to agree...that clock striking thirteen really did it for me in this piece. I enjoyed reading this.<br /><br />-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-52483420707372851732010-03-05T04:53:13.582-08:002010-03-05T04:53:13.582-08:00"on the threshhold of myth". This is qui..."on the threshhold of myth". This is quite mythical itself and dreamlike, as Joseph says.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-32270362330328043942010-03-04T22:27:19.596-08:002010-03-04T22:27:19.596-08:00I like the beginning,
...beyond
the twe...I like the beginning,<br /><br /> ...beyond<br /> the twelfth chime<br /> on the threshold of myth<br /><br />it seems a little different way to think about things beyond everyday reality.slatdang 2 2https://www.blogger.com/profile/06179511916412318228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-35291748409640807652010-03-04T18:27:19.931-08:002010-03-04T18:27:19.931-08:00Excellent--I think it fits the image quite well.Excellent--I think it fits the image quite well.spiritsoflenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09663418154339084941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-51448104946409960442010-03-04T16:56:17.133-08:002010-03-04T16:56:17.133-08:00It's already been said, but I too really like ...It's already been said, but I too really like that clock striking thirteen (reminds me of 1984 a bit) and the insignificant others... great dreamlike feel.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-55421925572937023262010-03-04T15:13:46.233-08:002010-03-04T15:13:46.233-08:00The chiming clock striking thirteen, surreal. Enj...The chiming clock striking thirteen, surreal. Enjoyed!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-19916146434369008112010-03-04T11:37:26.021-08:002010-03-04T11:37:26.021-08:00I like where you went with this...n icely done and...I like where you went with this...n icely done and thanks for sharing thisWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-39483831836818280392010-03-04T10:53:24.989-08:002010-03-04T10:53:24.989-08:00I like your wordplay:
insignificant others
from e...I like your wordplay:<br /><br /><i>insignificant others<br />from each of her decades</i><br /><br />Love the "doorsill of myth" phrase!Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-26470308253011175562010-03-04T10:23:01.849-08:002010-03-04T10:23:01.849-08:00You took us all the way into a paradox there. Love...You took us all the way into a paradox there. Loved it.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com