tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post6283008673137879178..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Wednesday HaikuTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-15365516122099092952009-01-31T06:49:00.000-08:002009-01-31T06:49:00.000-08:00More haiku! Fantastic! I really like this! I found...More haiku! Fantastic! I really like this! I found 3WW through a comment PJD left elsewhere and somehow assumed that it was an all haiku group feasting on a three word bento for lunch each week.<BR/><BR/>And now I find that some are, although I have been astonished and delighted at the prose and other poetry forms I have found.<BR/><BR/>Tschüss,<BR/>ChrisSepiru Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08600130405222535830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-25550697644084471222009-01-30T11:00:00.000-08:002009-01-30T11:00:00.000-08:00i love that haiku and how you managed to put those...i love that haiku and how you managed to put those three words in one little haiku and it all feels so natural and strong.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-30837396148429531142009-01-30T01:01:00.000-08:002009-01-30T01:01:00.000-08:00Wonderfulwords! And I love the fractal it makes my...Wonderfulwords! <BR/>And I love the fractal it makes my head spin. I like it when my head spins!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-44168146785415094942009-01-29T16:55:00.000-08:002009-01-29T16:55:00.000-08:00I happened to see the other erosion haiku before t...I happened to see the other erosion haiku before this one. Both are very good, but they take the opposite tack. Yours starts with ruthless and ends with the caress, but the other was turned round. Perhaps different coasts of the same sea. :-)PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-24430958607279298702009-01-29T16:16:00.000-08:002009-01-29T16:16:00.000-08:00Both are excellent! Mine took me to the ocean, to...Both are excellent! Mine took me to the ocean, too.<BR/><BR/>The second one really hits home when I think of many of my students who suffer so much at home.Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-3876931570877554582009-01-29T10:48:00.000-08:002009-01-29T10:48:00.000-08:00Both are very powerful! I don't think I could choo...Both are very powerful! I don't think I could choose a favorite. Wonderful writing.<BR/><BR/>By the way, stop by my blog to pick up an award I have waiting for you there.Margueritehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17778169953273399035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-13769427450263023072009-01-29T08:11:00.000-08:002009-01-29T08:11:00.000-08:00That's real compression - and a real Haiku moment....That's real compression - and a real Haiku moment. Great.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-13713931350848383382009-01-29T07:48:00.000-08:002009-01-29T07:48:00.000-08:00Wow...very powerful images in both pieces. Wonderf...Wow...very powerful images in both pieces. Wonderful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-76610402723951708762009-01-29T07:11:00.000-08:002009-01-29T07:11:00.000-08:00Oh my gosh, these were both fantastic...the first ...Oh my gosh, these were both fantastic...the first one was incredibly visual, and the second one was incredibly truthful. I love the fractal image...a beautiful burst of colors.Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-76621902631424397342009-01-29T03:19:00.000-08:002009-01-29T03:19:00.000-08:00You did an incredible job with the prompt words. Y...You did an incredible job with the prompt words. Your haiku's are always wonderful, I've never had much luck with them myself. I particularly like this one, it is exceptionally vivid.Jane Doehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11087464056692451751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-62363866966896628682009-01-28T22:02:00.000-08:002009-01-28T22:02:00.000-08:00I never have anything to say other than lovely, bu...I never have anything to say other than lovely, but your work always is.Noah the Greathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11777681562599472033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-49062587683135107722009-01-28T20:43:00.000-08:002009-01-28T20:43:00.000-08:00perfecto!!!perfecto!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-13635217405941961242009-01-28T20:06:00.000-08:002009-01-28T20:06:00.000-08:00Very nice one!!!Very nice one!!!Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-91932452566395036702009-01-28T19:16:00.000-08:002009-01-28T19:16:00.000-08:00I get the point........I get the point........Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-62997849106402199892009-01-28T17:48:00.000-08:002009-01-28T17:48:00.000-08:00I like the second one, says so much of how people ...I like the second one, says so much of how people can touch and change other peopleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-16109595342103553332009-01-28T17:34:00.000-08:002009-01-28T17:34:00.000-08:00I enjoyed both but the sentence was the most power...I enjoyed both but the sentence was the most powerful. Nicely doneMHNhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14053011503400018095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-51308153615517731352009-01-28T17:18:00.000-08:002009-01-28T17:18:00.000-08:00beautiful fractal..a ruthless caress... thrz beaut...beautiful fractal..a ruthless caress... thrz beauty in every word...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-45343867728425089052009-01-28T15:48:00.000-08:002009-01-28T15:48:00.000-08:00that first stanza is perfection....ruthless tidesp...that first stanza is perfection....<BR/><BR/>ruthless tides<BR/>pummel jagged rocks<BR/>caress sandpaisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-42275997071334429722009-01-28T14:46:00.000-08:002009-01-28T14:46:00.000-08:00Both are excellent, but the American Sentence take...Both are excellent, but the American Sentence takes the edge.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-46945729867328467322009-01-28T14:11:00.000-08:002009-01-28T14:11:00.000-08:00Hey Tumble, nice haiku and sentence. Well done.Hey Tumble, nice haiku and sentence. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-78096689385512561332009-01-28T13:31:00.000-08:002009-01-28T13:31:00.000-08:00Both are very strong examples on each genre. I lik...Both are very strong examples on each genre. I like both, equallyThom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-4040998099197221032009-01-28T12:19:00.000-08:002009-01-28T12:19:00.000-08:00so much said in a few great words Sue!Sue the haik...so much said in a few great words Sue!<BR/>Sue the haiku queen!Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.com