tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post5873080008074332955..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: For Read Write Poem #94Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-11782702529336428462009-10-06T12:52:05.114-07:002009-10-06T12:52:05.114-07:00I really like this. The line about the way the cam...I really like this. The line about the way the camera can cleanse is nice. We so often get a sanitized reality on TV. That idea contrasts nicely with the axe seemingly tolling closer and closer.Jameshttp://coyotemercury.com/blog1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-31483165284373061122009-10-04T07:24:09.642-07:002009-10-04T07:24:09.642-07:00Now I remember!
This is a vivid look at the situ...Now I remember! <br /><br />This is a vivid look at the situation. I loved "power saris" particularly. <br /><br />Have you seen "The Girl in the Cafe"?(May sound irrelevant, but it's not.)<br />Check Imdb.com for details.Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-74475901432547389992009-10-03T17:24:46.914-07:002009-10-03T17:24:46.914-07:00Very provocative - great job!Very provocative - great job!Zouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-36329494891225454162009-10-03T10:52:46.676-07:002009-10-03T10:52:46.676-07:00Talk about a metaphorical punch to the gut! This ...Talk about a metaphorical punch to the gut! This was too fabulous and moving for mere words. Makes me look seriously at how I turn a blind eye too...Bellehttp://shadowplay1.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-64282022259919972732009-10-03T09:31:37.857-07:002009-10-03T09:31:37.857-07:00Power Saris.. I do relate to that!
let the red bl...Power Saris.. I do relate to that!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/10/let-red-bleed.html" rel="nofollow">let the red bleed</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-19429494503898120432009-10-02T16:19:09.667-07:002009-10-02T16:19:09.667-07:00a poetic juggernaut. Thank you.a poetic juggernaut. Thank you.Julie Jordan Scotthttp://www.juliejordanscott.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-32524363568631749712009-10-02T12:56:46.607-07:002009-10-02T12:56:46.607-07:00brings a new perspective to g-20 for sure...brings a new perspective to g-20 for sure...Anahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-89018688254009913072009-10-02T11:48:28.083-07:002009-10-02T11:48:28.083-07:00wow. really intriguing, makes me want to know more...wow. really intriguing, makes me want to know more. like everyone else, the phrases about suits and saris really make an impact.sgreerpitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-25558229388604442302009-10-02T01:16:38.558-07:002009-10-02T01:16:38.558-07:00Great title, and very provocative poem. It capture...Great title, and very provocative poem. It captures well the growing divide.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-39700364433957861562009-10-02T00:10:26.347-07:002009-10-02T00:10:26.347-07:00Interesting how we see contrasts. Interesting too...Interesting how we see contrasts. Interesting too, how we also don't. Ability and need - two things the world is very full of, day by day. Thank you for this poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-90971485430312709762009-10-01T18:12:48.093-07:002009-10-01T18:12:48.093-07:00What a powerful voice you have given your words th...What a powerful voice you have given your words through your imaginative composition. Thanks for posting this human reflection of our world.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-43703701652691163022009-10-01T15:51:39.539-07:002009-10-01T15:51:39.539-07:00This was very disturbing and true..very well writt...This was very disturbing and true..very well written...Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-27148188866541355162009-10-01T14:11:58.695-07:002009-10-01T14:11:58.695-07:00Oh, for tolerance.
Excellently done.Oh, for tolerance.<br />Excellently done.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-35230584878565466472009-10-01T14:07:36.071-07:002009-10-01T14:07:36.071-07:00I really like the way the nouns in this roll off t...I really like the way the nouns in this roll off the tongue; you are economical with articles, and it gives the poem a strong cadence and flow. The return with modification to the suits and saris at the end is powerful and ironic.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-85041438681992711362009-10-01T13:27:57.580-07:002009-10-01T13:27:57.580-07:00I dunno what I can add to the above except that I ...I dunno what I can add to the above except that I like it.Markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-84030867402334912162009-10-01T12:43:14.468-07:002009-10-01T12:43:14.468-07:00Wouldn't humanities world be so much more supp...Wouldn't humanities world be so much more supportive of life if the indifference and greed of certain cultures did not inbreed their daily fare? Your empathetical expression seems to be a consistent nadir. Thanks for putting it into such relevant and concise poetry.<br />Regards,<br />DHDonald Harbourhttp://woodennickel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-25055680295894953122009-10-01T12:12:27.703-07:002009-10-01T12:12:27.703-07:00"those who'll never know
a stomach’s grow..."those who'll never know<br />a stomach’s growl <br />and those who looked away<br />to birth a plague"<br /><br />very deep words indeed! thanks for this!mingushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03126445544179444708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-90669076876468573602009-10-01T11:23:08.179-07:002009-10-01T11:23:08.179-07:00crisp suits and power ties
silken saris on pampere...<i>crisp suits and power ties<br />silken saris on pampered bodies<br />...<br />silken suits and power saris</i><br /><br />Very nice the way you return to your initial image, with a little twist, in your last stanza, ever so slightly blurring distinctions.<br />_____<br /><br />Paul Oakley<br />Blogging his ReadWritePoem poems at <br /><a href="http://innerlight-radiantlife.blogspot.com/search/label/Read%20Write%20Poem" rel="nofollow"><i>Inner Light, Radiant Life</i></a>Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.com