tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post4544811357275838658..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Haiku and WatercolorTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-58297592429658975092007-07-13T13:17:00.000-07:002007-07-13T13:17:00.000-07:00A beautiful watercolor to match two excellent poem...A beautiful watercolor to match two excellent poems. Your second one, with the sounds it evokes, is truly marvelous. I enjoyed it very much and easily visualized the scene.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-18645903100822564522007-07-12T15:11:00.000-07:002007-07-12T15:11:00.000-07:00is that your painting of the birds? it is so beau...is that your painting of the birds? it is so beautiful. you're a virtuoso in making art of nature. i love your work (and assuming it's ok, i will add this blog to my poetry blog's blogroll).BeLoved....https://www.blogger.com/profile/01771614142603767239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-71733146687010901832007-07-11T09:16:00.000-07:002007-07-11T09:16:00.000-07:00Excellent haiku. You really brought me into the sc...Excellent haiku. You really brought me into the scene, like a gentle walk. I love the watercolor, too.get zappedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716557355765204155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-89442664133107562722007-07-11T04:18:00.000-07:002007-07-11T04:18:00.000-07:00These are very good. Exciting to see each bird pa...These are very good. Exciting to see each bird paired with another animal within the haiku. Lots of action in each.jemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-53037916878000054792007-07-11T03:29:00.000-07:002007-07-11T03:29:00.000-07:00These are wonderful, your words are just right, ev...These are wonderful, your words are just right, evocative, vivid, I could see / hear the images very well.Heartfulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12005260190867133282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-57268260381296428042007-07-10T21:29:00.000-07:002007-07-10T21:29:00.000-07:00Your watercolor is truly beautiful and I love the ...Your watercolor is truly beautiful and I love the colors and feeling in it. Your haiku are wonderful! I've always loved pigeons and I enjoy watching their puffing mating dance -- the males work so hard and the females ignore them most of the time! The crouching cat adds a powerful element of contrast and danger. Well done. And the loons and train whistle created an incredible sound in my mind as I read your haiku -- very cool. And I really like the image of the coyote being surprised. <BR/>:)Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-10331066355104217262007-07-10T18:13:00.000-07:002007-07-10T18:13:00.000-07:00words and painting made me take a deep breathlovel...words and painting made me take a deep breath<BR/><BR/>lovely!Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-84804712575574800522007-07-10T17:47:00.000-07:002007-07-10T17:47:00.000-07:00Beautiful watercolor and haiku to match!Beautiful watercolor and haiku to match!Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-88909505441513679442007-07-10T11:05:00.000-07:002007-07-10T11:05:00.000-07:00I can just hear and see that last one. :-)I can just hear and see that last one. :-)Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-59863247023663487852007-07-10T09:20:00.000-07:002007-07-10T09:20:00.000-07:00I feel for the birds, but also know it's not as ea...I feel for the birds, but also know it's not as easy as the cat thinks. The sparrows in our yard used to divebomb the barn cats, who were terrors to small earthbound creatures and terrified of sparrows.Plain Foolishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02922112483988477841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-50511341703005612402007-07-10T07:03:00.000-07:002007-07-10T07:03:00.000-07:00Oh my. So real and filled with surprises.Oh my. So real and filled with surprises.Annie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-18830878380608317692007-07-10T07:01:00.000-07:002007-07-10T07:01:00.000-07:00Beautiful watercolor and the first haiku brings so...Beautiful watercolor and the first haiku brings sound to my ears.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-68427167091984995662007-07-10T03:49:00.000-07:002007-07-10T03:49:00.000-07:00Lovely work!The second haiku makes me homesick, fo...Lovely work!<BR/><BR/>The second haiku makes me homesick, for a lake high in the mountains.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-63523561717783858722007-07-10T01:53:00.000-07:002007-07-10T01:53:00.000-07:00I love the watercolour too!I love the watercolour too!Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-83935175902978141652007-07-10T01:52:00.000-07:002007-07-10T01:52:00.000-07:00I like watching pigeons strut, hope the cat misses...I like watching pigeons strut, hope the cat misses. <BR/><BR/>Your second haiku fits in so many evocative sounds!Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-84909574232458707302007-07-09T12:44:00.000-07:002007-07-09T12:44:00.000-07:00Love this first one (and feel for the birds, our c...Love this first one (and feel for the birds, our cats regularly bring in unlucky feathered victims).spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.com