tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post4300376231238816984..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Fleeting HaikuTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-69420976237213979492008-10-02T17:06:00.000-07:002008-10-02T17:06:00.000-07:00I love the persids meteor shower and have enjoyed ...I love the persids meteor shower and have enjoyed it many times. Now that I live in the desert it is often obscured by Monsoon clouds! Go figure! Loved that haiku the best though.Kathie Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10377224759599266209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-85865794219433533862008-10-01T12:13:00.000-07:002008-10-01T12:13:00.000-07:00..the fractal is eloquent-the poems are subtle..ma.....the fractal is eloquent-the poems are subtle..many thanks..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-67259436916501426152008-09-30T16:26:00.000-07:002008-09-30T16:26:00.000-07:00The fractal image is wonderful. I love the first ...The fractal image is wonderful. I love the first poem. A meteor shower is certainly fleeting.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-38913864061566353752008-09-30T15:04:00.000-07:002008-09-30T15:04:00.000-07:00It's funny but a lot of other people 'fleeting' po...It's funny but a lot of other people 'fleeting' poems have reminded me of summer in Ohio and waiting for storms to break...and than you write one. Cheers for that! Nicely done as well. :PLenorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00438831003220950550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-21496839485249864222008-09-30T11:56:00.000-07:002008-09-30T11:56:00.000-07:00Sue, these are so good. I have had trouble viewin...Sue, these are so good. I have had trouble viewing the showers. I never seem to be in the right place. Some August I am going to make that my mission - to view them night after night.... and you have captured the western thunder events perfectly in tune.Quiet Pathshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00758542150832581706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-16158387405482868962008-09-30T09:43:00.000-07:002008-09-30T09:43:00.000-07:00Enjoyed these. I like the phrases and your word ch...Enjoyed these. I like the phrases and your word choices. Thanks for the read.susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924982664582970754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-43237600689680938502008-09-30T07:53:00.000-07:002008-09-30T07:53:00.000-07:00The thunder seems so real in this one. Immediate.V...The thunder seems so real in this one. Immediate.<BR/>Very clever use of words.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-38640091324589055402008-09-30T07:28:00.000-07:002008-09-30T07:28:00.000-07:00I missed the showers this August! But, I do love a...I missed the showers this August! But, I do love a good thunderstorm. <BR/>Nice work, Sue.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-52465047388650116622008-09-30T06:36:00.000-07:002008-09-30T06:36:00.000-07:00The "thunder applauding" was my favorite phrases. ...The "thunder applauding" was my favorite phrases. Both stanzas poignant images of things fleeting.<BR/><BR/>-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-78205673120583372522008-09-29T20:52:00.000-07:002008-09-29T20:52:00.000-07:00Hi Tumblewords!I love the thunder applauding--that...Hi Tumblewords!<BR/>I love the thunder applauding--that's fun...<BR/><BR/>'movin' on'...yes indeed.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for this thing of loveliness!<BR/>BethBeth P.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02621990661878989356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-7792414211574284822008-09-29T16:22:00.000-07:002008-09-29T16:22:00.000-07:00i am completely enamored with your capture of fall...i am completely enamored with your capture of falling stars!qualcosa di bellohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15107076097533430296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-80740246662510415892008-09-29T13:24:00.000-07:002008-09-29T13:24:00.000-07:00I have missed the showers, too....But your poem is...I have missed the showers, too....But your poem is enough for me. And I know those storms. We are having a summer finale and encore this week, so I especially enjoy this.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-74644995977002534052008-09-29T11:30:00.000-07:002008-09-29T11:30:00.000-07:00Hi TW, you hit a sore spot of mine with your first...Hi TW, you hit a sore spot of mine with your first one. I have spent hours outside looking for those and haven't ever seen one. <BR/>Setting the alarm clock on many occasions wasn't any better. <BR/>I did see a meteorite falling just before going to bed once where I didn't think the Perseids should be.<BR/>I like your poem, those shooting stars really '<I>fleeted</I>' for me. :-)<BR/>..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.com