tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post3796680822195441680..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Senryu for Magpie TalesTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-40944107238108034692010-10-06T16:57:54.123-07:002010-10-06T16:57:54.123-07:00beautiful haiku!beautiful haiku!Kaelinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09746709813296082126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-73433273623497763362010-10-05T16:13:15.924-07:002010-10-05T16:13:15.924-07:00You have said it all so concisely. This is perfect...You have said it all so concisely. This is perfect. I can see it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-41819071557806146132010-10-05T14:26:21.097-07:002010-10-05T14:26:21.097-07:00Exquisite! I love haiku and this is a gem, thank ...Exquisite! I love haiku and this is a gem, thank you.cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04907967489094621351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-72425163161804958942010-10-05T01:47:45.469-07:002010-10-05T01:47:45.469-07:00Sue,
A perfect description!
relSue,<br />A perfect description!<br />relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-12106763005984939352010-10-04T22:28:02.965-07:002010-10-04T22:28:02.965-07:00Do not know anything about haikus, but I loved the...Do not know anything about haikus, but I loved the tranquil zen feeling of your words.Marie Nicolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349867233197745366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-71162447271109550832010-10-04T19:05:50.364-07:002010-10-04T19:05:50.364-07:00Wonderful dichotomous images TW, fiery/still life,...Wonderful dichotomous images TW, fiery/still life, reflections/still life, fragile/chimney. Beautiful.Jenniferhttp://www.jensrealia.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-69369583639765623272010-10-04T18:35:25.487-07:002010-10-04T18:35:25.487-07:00Just simply a perfect Magpie.
Mine is up.
PGJust simply a perfect Magpie.<br /><br />Mine is up.<br /><br />PGOne Prayer Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17455437909918314217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-4292968537727914172010-10-04T14:31:51.077-07:002010-10-04T14:31:51.077-07:00An amazing Magpie Tumblewords! :-)An amazing Magpie Tumblewords! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-91638672146916075102010-10-04T08:38:59.416-07:002010-10-04T08:38:59.416-07:00Beautiful image you painted in my mind. Thank you...Beautiful image you painted in my mind. Thank you.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-32893655172747536082010-10-04T05:35:18.741-07:002010-10-04T05:35:18.741-07:00I love the juxtaposition of the fiery and the frag...I love the juxtaposition of the fiery and the fragile.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-32397069024295196002010-10-04T03:00:37.508-07:002010-10-04T03:00:37.508-07:00Ahhh, now I see it. It's a Senryu. No wonder t...Ahhh, now I see it. It's a Senryu. No wonder there was no reference to the season, or kigo.<br /><br />Thank you for introducing different forms of Japanese poetry.<br /><br />Still, your senryu was so delightful.ninotazizhttp://www.poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-25092153639865948262010-10-04T02:55:41.600-07:002010-10-04T02:55:41.600-07:00Haikus need understanding of form and structure. T...Haikus need understanding of form and structure. The 17 moras in 5-7-5 form. Of cutting kireji.<br /><br />I rarely try it because of its stringent requirements.<br /><br />Here at last I find a haiku as close to its Japanese form as possible.<br /><br />Lovely. Really lovely.ninotazizhttp://www.poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-13936378141620823612010-10-03T15:28:12.393-07:002010-10-03T15:28:12.393-07:00Small, but beautifully formed.Small, but beautifully formed.Dickhttp://patteran.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-4471602256347485602010-10-03T09:27:27.785-07:002010-10-03T09:27:27.785-07:00I'd love to be able to paint the image my mind...I'd love to be able to paint the image my mind conjures at your words.Angie Muresanhttp://www.angiemuresan.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-56189642344552747242010-10-03T05:57:36.801-07:002010-10-03T05:57:36.801-07:00Excellent magpie! =)
-WeaselExcellent magpie! =)<br /><br />-WeaselWeaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-80292290202323752302010-10-02T11:08:09.122-07:002010-10-02T11:08:09.122-07:00Perfect!
bPerfect!<br /><br />bb+ (Retire In Style Blog)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05114209481329773753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-70123686428492673692010-10-02T09:37:07.134-07:002010-10-02T09:37:07.134-07:00Wonderful. Nice Mag. Love and Light, SenderWonderful. Nice Mag. Love and Light, SenderUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142100957711935950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-62385127547893077522010-10-02T06:34:29.807-07:002010-10-02T06:34:29.807-07:00"echo the fragile chimney" - Nice!"echo the fragile chimney" - Nice!Anahttp://theperfectionproject.wordpress.com/2010/10/01/lantern-light/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-2642923697984147302010-10-02T05:15:41.818-07:002010-10-02T05:15:41.818-07:00I had to look into the lamp again..I see it now! V...I had to look into the lamp again..I see it now! Very nice!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-87433628062358154512010-10-02T03:50:15.884-07:002010-10-02T03:50:15.884-07:00ha. love the turn in the last line...great magpie!...ha. love the turn in the last line...great magpie!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-11028098728337306052010-10-01T22:48:42.045-07:002010-10-01T22:48:42.045-07:00great imagery-perfect wordsgreat imagery-perfect wordsKathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-4478987460514433872010-10-01T22:23:31.760-07:002010-10-01T22:23:31.760-07:00Wonderfully stated, still life, maybe we could lea...Wonderfully stated, still life, maybe we could learn something from this concept as opposed to our fast paced world to today.<br /><br />Still life... in what sense of the word? Total bliss.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-73791117947483975392010-10-01T21:54:08.146-07:002010-10-01T21:54:08.146-07:00very successful haiku - I always feel the poem suc...very successful haiku - I always feel the poem succeeds when it shows me something right under my nose that I didn't recognize. In ten words, you showed me - a still life painting. Marvellous!brokenpenwriterhttp://brokenpenwriter.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-66271110577312015512010-10-01T16:20:20.211-07:002010-10-01T16:20:20.211-07:00Delightful .........Delightful .........Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-62040048148018788202010-10-01T15:44:13.536-07:002010-10-01T15:44:13.536-07:00I love your Haiku. So much with so few words what ...I love your Haiku. So much with so few words what a treasure.Kristen Haskellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481526316071592146noreply@blogger.com