tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post1697105387211270538..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Literal EarTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-63957618714173648942008-01-11T12:29:00.000-08:002008-01-11T12:29:00.000-08:00"night snows fat flakes" I like how you said this..."night snows fat flakes" I like how you said this! I'll think of this poem every time I have to shovel now!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-68291044585188210982008-01-11T11:17:00.000-08:002008-01-11T11:17:00.000-08:00Forgive me the grin as I read.Could you toss a bit...Forgive me the grin as I read.<BR/><BR/>Could you toss a bit of that snow toward South Florida, please? Aim directly for me, just don't let go of the shovel.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-59987954276512040502008-01-10T19:15:00.000-08:002008-01-10T19:15:00.000-08:00What a picture...all those evocative and *very* re...What a picture...all those evocative and *very* real sounds (I wonder what you'd have placed for the symbols, though - me? I've got a potty-mouth)...I'll hope for you the sound of ice and snow melting. Clear rivers with a tenor's warble.Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-86484957242026576562008-01-10T14:29:00.000-08:002008-01-10T14:29:00.000-08:00Dear Sue,You do get lots of snow!Do be careful. Sp...Dear Sue,<BR/>You do get lots of snow!<BR/>Do be careful. Spring will melt what is left when you weary of the shovel.<BR/>SherryQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02473455565144414399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-58785717634882001002008-01-10T13:59:00.000-08:002008-01-10T13:59:00.000-08:00I now live in Texas. But your beautiful lines remi...I now live in Texas. But your beautiful lines reminded me of the soft crushing sound from fresh snow when I stand on it.Revathihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17604252078837753541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-22564761849157096622008-01-10T11:21:00.000-08:002008-01-10T11:21:00.000-08:00I've had those exact same literal moments with my ...I've had those exact same literal moments with my shovel...not lately...but more to come this winter.<BR/>Thank you for popping in to read my submission and fr your kind words.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11518964123008830311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-6688661226790550202008-01-10T10:58:00.000-08:002008-01-10T10:58:00.000-08:00Oh my goodness. I can certainly feel your frustrat...Oh my goodness. I can certainly feel your frustration. Nicely done!Holly Machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03610077263690125535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-43011501379880163132008-01-10T06:29:00.000-08:002008-01-10T06:29:00.000-08:00the problem with having a trained ear.......the problem with having a trained ear.......paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-36251513440154596272008-01-10T06:14:00.000-08:002008-01-10T06:14:00.000-08:00I got a good laugh from this one because I am sitt...I got a good laugh from this one because I am sitting here today under somewhat sunny but, cloudy skies. I don't have any snow right now. <BR/><BR/>Seriously though, I am sorry you have to endure that shoveling each day. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day. <BR/><BR/>By the way, I have a writing award for you at <A HREF="http://poefiti.blogspot.com/2008/01/blog-award.html" REL="nofollow">"Blog Award"</A> if you would like stop by. Have a nice day.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-2287607475696113812008-01-10T06:03:00.000-08:002008-01-10T06:03:00.000-08:00I can't curse loud in school! What would the kids ...I can't curse loud in school! What would the kids say?<BR/><BR/>However outside of it..<BR/><BR/>LOL!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-58007514965712264342008-01-10T05:49:00.000-08:002008-01-10T05:49:00.000-08:00Great reason to take walk and hear the silence. VW...Great reason to take walk and hear the silence. VWDAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-8461424189329487192008-01-10T05:37:00.000-08:002008-01-10T05:37:00.000-08:00believe me if i say i will worship ur words after ...believe me if i say i will worship ur words after reading dis one...<BR/>perfect is 2 small a word for disAnirudh 'Lallan' Choudhryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12633407829751168331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-65715463872284027792008-01-10T05:09:00.000-08:002008-01-10T05:09:00.000-08:00Move to Florida. :)You do create a sound in my min...Move to Florida. :)<BR/><BR/>You do create a sound in my mind though.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-69696572031608707232008-01-10T04:40:00.000-08:002008-01-10T04:40:00.000-08:00Wonderful piece of writing!Thankfully there is eno...Wonderful piece of writing!<BR/><BR/>Thankfully there is enough manpower in my home that rarely do I have to shovel. So for me each fresh snowfall is a welcome event. My husband however would totally relate to this.<BR/><BR/>Well done!Christine Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14605702499635622573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-9091570574563110462008-01-10T03:57:00.000-08:002008-01-10T03:57:00.000-08:00Wow! You folks are deep in snow whilst it's just c...Wow! You folks are deep in snow whilst it's just cold, grey and windy over here. Loved it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-67315868419360715362008-01-10T03:39:00.000-08:002008-01-10T03:39:00.000-08:00This poem gave me a giggles for sure! I remember w...This poem gave me a giggles for sure! <BR/>I remember when I used to do the same. Snow is quite rare, so it's a nice change.....especially when you don't have to shovel. Well put together piece!<BR/><BR/>Hugs Sherrie<BR/>Be careful and don't hurt yourself shoveling!Giggleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11713143985984314202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-70000985140950466052008-01-10T02:07:00.000-08:002008-01-10T02:07:00.000-08:00Oh I've a huge grin on my face right now, this is ...Oh I've a huge grin on my face right now, this is superb, every last word!!! Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-66679260112976178722008-01-09T23:58:00.000-08:002008-01-09T23:58:00.000-08:00excellent! For the first time for years we had pro...excellent! For the first time for years we had proper snow recently, its a novelty to us, regular snow shovelling isn't something that appeals to me...Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-28731057294918107792008-01-09T22:31:00.000-08:002008-01-09T22:31:00.000-08:00This is perfect! I uttered a few curse words at my...This is perfect! I uttered a few curse words at my snowblower and shovel today. We got hit with about 15 inches overnight. $#(@)(%)' indeed!Beau Brackishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08472788833737826733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-58440342508696623212008-01-09T21:57:00.000-08:002008-01-09T21:57:00.000-08:00yes. that's it exactly. including that last stan...yes. that's it exactly. including that last stanza!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-5132841263294776102008-01-09T21:10:00.000-08:002008-01-09T21:10:00.000-08:00That was fabulous! And I love the picture with it...That was fabulous! And I love the picture with it.Forgetfulonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07895803172098820967noreply@blogger.com