tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post1425981123268686597..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: At the EdgeTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-32542048796448006462007-09-10T00:02:00.000-07:002007-09-10T00:02:00.000-07:00oh, i'll read it again n again... beautiful, and t...oh, i'll read it again n again... beautiful, and the watercolor is gorgeous too. it is nice to have you on delhidreams. pls take care.delhidreamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04613041484425960760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-43625037719605562562007-09-01T11:34:00.000-07:002007-09-01T11:34:00.000-07:00This is lovely. I really like the way that the na...This is lovely. I really like the way that the natural interplay between light and shadow moves so deftly into the realm of human relationships. Very, very nice.Jonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04324054034345621199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-52203919259017312662007-08-31T20:45:00.000-07:002007-08-31T20:45:00.000-07:00Hi Sue! Such beautiful words and watercolor! In th...Hi Sue! Such beautiful words and watercolor! In the first part, there is such a sweet intimacy between the sun and the window. And in the second part, I really like the eyes being the window -- really cool.<BR/>:)Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-29032871795190981882007-08-31T20:34:00.000-07:002007-08-31T20:34:00.000-07:00beautiful watercolorbeautiful watercolorharmonyinlinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12702022042647519754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-39420186627772792532007-08-31T09:34:00.000-07:002007-08-31T09:34:00.000-07:00Nice . . . I just like the feel of the words in my...Nice . . . I just like the feel of the words in my mouth, very satisfying. You obviously put more time into yours than I did mine -- thanks for commenting, by the way!Angela S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06261493096023686522noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-58063360442918426402007-08-31T07:48:00.000-07:002007-08-31T07:48:00.000-07:00These were both so beautiful, but I especially lov...These were both so beautiful, but I especially loved the first one! Gorgeous. :~)Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-25186314678318660662007-08-30T22:42:00.000-07:002007-08-30T22:42:00.000-07:00It would free the pain, I mean pane, wouldn't it? ...It would free the pain, I mean pane, wouldn't it? Good poem.Rethabilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03523368313680103826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-23242505184458614952007-08-30T19:30:00.000-07:002007-08-30T19:30:00.000-07:00Intense! and it would take a book to say more.Intense! and it would take a book to say more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-43812722758431582772007-08-30T19:05:00.000-07:002007-08-30T19:05:00.000-07:00The paring of those two images (not to miss the lo...The paring of those two images (not to miss the lovely third, of course!) is remarkable. Such spare contrast.Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-78306140901155078892007-08-30T17:51:00.000-07:002007-08-30T17:51:00.000-07:00"I know the endbefore you mouth a word" Beautiful ..."I know the end<BR/>before you mouth a word" Beautiful line...Gilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14764043301335852527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-38723146002926847972007-08-30T15:21:00.000-07:002007-08-30T15:21:00.000-07:00I really liked them both and the watercolor was lo...I really liked them both and the watercolor was lovely.Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-44429130763388897872007-08-30T14:18:00.000-07:002007-08-30T14:18:00.000-07:00A very powerful poem and a lovely watercolour. 'A ...A very powerful poem and a lovely watercolour. 'A shadow understrokes/ the open window' - a very clever choice of word in 'understrokes' makes this an effective opening. I agree with everyone else about the second verse.carolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08020421002889991849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-18503050868064854972007-08-30T11:39:00.000-07:002007-08-30T11:39:00.000-07:00Oh wow. You say so much with such spare lines. H...Oh wow. You say so much with such spare lines. Hauntingly beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-38252098834846373472007-08-30T11:38:00.000-07:002007-08-30T11:38:00.000-07:00Very powerful 2nd verse. I like the watercolour ac...Very powerful 2nd verse. I like the watercolour accompanying the poem. Excellent.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-67313115608467705452007-08-30T11:20:00.000-07:002007-08-30T11:20:00.000-07:00Hi Tumble,I see heartbreak and frost. RosexoHi Tumble,<BR/><BR/>I see heartbreak and frost. <BR/><BR/>Rose<BR/><BR/>xoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-28704050321927809862007-08-30T11:15:00.000-07:002007-08-30T11:15:00.000-07:00I love the imagery your words conjure up in my min...I love the imagery your words conjure up in my mind. :)Constance Brewerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17964121072645959593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-77964556707370842172007-08-30T10:56:00.000-07:002007-08-30T10:56:00.000-07:00I like how your poems invoke the seasons and the c...I like how your poems invoke the seasons and the changes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-62958163554997464342007-08-30T09:50:00.000-07:002007-08-30T09:50:00.000-07:00That second part stays in mind.That second part stays in mind.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-73151716679893705392007-08-30T09:41:00.000-07:002007-08-30T09:41:00.000-07:00I know the end, before a word..you are truly gifte...I know the end, before a word..<BR/>you are truly gifted..Ramblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04048279856792308653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-85716433977991412122007-08-30T09:40:00.000-07:002007-08-30T09:40:00.000-07:00I was very struck by the first line of the second ...I was very struck by the first line of the second part here. Lovely watercolour too.Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.com